My indignation

The hardest part of being part of the society comes in the moment you birth. Since that instant until you die, you have to deal with the uncomfortable fact that people always have the need to label you. And that’s very weird so far.
First of all, I know that their
words cannot define my life because that’s kind of my job, but it is very awkward
to me to accept that they always are making judges. I know that the judgment
exists all over the world and it is inevitable to get into that, but when I
caught up into situations that they literally ask me things to make a judgment,
and I know that they are making it, I get blocked. My mind does not work and I
start to sweat and my face turns red, and that is not fair.
Do not misunderstand me, but it is
hard to me to verbalize my thoughts. I mean, I know what I think and I have a
posture in different themes but when people wanted to mark me into a paragraph,
I feel uncomfortable. I cannot understand why people always want to put you
into a box with another people. I cannot understand why they cannot do the task
of know you, mix a lot of characteristics and define you as an unique person,
instead of make a prefabricated cartoon of you and assume things about you
because you fit in into that cartoon. I know that that is the way that you can
fit in into their minds, but in spite of that I cannot understand when, one
time they define you as a cartoon, they started to behave different around you,
like they don’t know you or like you are not the same person that were talking
to them for weeks. That is kind of disrespectful.
At certain point, it is very funny
to observe that human behavior, because you start to learn that you can fit
into different situations just to try to not annoy them, but that is not the
way to make things right. Everybody has the right to behave the way they want,
and everybody has the opportunity to know different kind of human being every
day. You only have to give you the opportunity to do it! Don’t lose the chance
to know a most wonderful person (or the worst) just because you enclose your
mind into an archetype and assume that you know the other person when you have
not had more than ten minutes talking with that person.
Wake up people, be free. Let you
know them.
I really agree with you, labels sucks!
ResponderBorrarThe message is clear on the overall, good paragraphing and intent to make it cohesive.
ResponderBorrarHowever, there are several instances of incoherence that affect he smoothness of reading. Check below.
Corrections :
moment you birth= moment of your birth
And that’s very weird so far.= check on coherence
awkward to me= awkward for me
when I caught up into = when I get caught up in
hard to me= hard for me
people wanted to mark me into a paragraph= check on coherence
instead of make a prefabricated cartoon = instead of making a ready made cartoon
as an unique person= as a unique person
T:3, L:2, G: 2= 7 pts
Grade: 5.5